I WANT to like this show, I really do. The characters seem genuine and approachable. But... but.... but... every time you turn around, some PREPOSTEROUSLY STUPID, ridiculously UNLIKELY event occurs to hype up the dramatic tone to the point where you're torn between laughing at how inept it is, and throwing things at the screen in lieu of the writers and editors.
It's sad, really.
I'm going to mention a couple examples, "spoiler warning", but I'll try and make them vague so they won't be.
1) Long trip. In a Ƥhũcking TESLA. Right, shorter than usual range, ANY other car would have better range, but hey, we're making a LONG trip of about 350 miles, so we first need to hype the tension. Turn off the nav system, because we don't want to be followed, so we have to download an APP that will tell us where there are electrical filling stations for this thing. OOP. Middle of nowhere, so "no signal". RIGHT THERE you have ALREADY met, and pushed past, your allotted "manufactured drama" quotient for this current event sequence.
ARE WE DONE YET? Nope. Stopped at a stop light. Not sure why there's a stop light, here, but... whatever. BAM rear-ended out of NOWHERE. Sure, it HAPPENS. But EXACTLY at the worst possible time? And the driver insists on trying to trade info, when they very much DON'T want to trade info.... Flee!!! DRAMA OVERLOAD ONE FINALLY, 30 miles remaining, signal, app, and hey, THERE is a place to recharge the batteries. Oh, wait, the "pump is broken". DRAMA OVERLOAD TWO. Well, do you have a 240v AC outlet? Yes. Plug in there, but it'll take an hour to charge up far enough to get to the nearest alternate location. OK, fine. WAIT, we'll have two assholes break into a FIGHT right outside the convenience stop, meaning the cops are going to be called, only 15 mins into that hour. DRAMA OVERLOAD THREE. Sure you do occasionally have fights outside of convenience stops, but RIGHT IN THAT NARROW WINDOW so as to Ƥhũck with them? I call "bovine excreta".
BUT WAIT, we aren't done yet -- having been forced to "flee" before the charge was sufficient, we're going to take the car to the sheer, utter end of its range... and then arrange for a tow truck. BECAUSE WE COULDN'T **possibly** HAVE THOUGHT TO DO THAT back before we were STUCK BY THE SIDE OF THE ROAD... DRAMA OVERLOAD FOUR.
Ridiculous.
But wait, THAT WAS ALL IN ONE EPISODE.
The next point is less drawn out, but equally stupid...
Our heroine is attending her 15th HS class reunion with one of her besties from HS. She's staying with her bestie and husband, said husband whom our heroine was doing back in HS (i.e., the bestie already has reason to feel jealous). NOW, bestie apparently believes her husband is fooling around on her -- no proof, just "missing lots of nights". And directly ASKS our heroine (she has a very disreputable past) NOT to sleep with her husband. So, LATER, when our heroine finds out the hubby is doing HEROIN, and gets accused it being our heroine's, by her bestie, she takes the rap and then confronts the hubby over it later at the Reunion... back in a room privately... yes, of course. And you can ALREADY SMELL WHAT IS COMING no less than FIVE MINUTES BEFORE IT "happens". Yup. For reasons I won't go into (I'll allow them, but not attempt to explain) she tells the hubby in no uncertain terms that he IS going to seek assistance and that the bestie IS her best friend and she is going to make sure HE DOESN'T HURT HER.... and then kisses him (again, explicable in context but not going to explain)... GUESS WHO BREAKS IN AT **EXACTLY** the moment of the kiss? Right. The bestie.
I just stopped watching it right then and there. I SO wanted to let it work out, but Ƥhũck that's just wretchedly bad writing. SHAME on whoever it is wrote both of those sequences. YOU SHOULD STOP WRITING. If you don't understand what is wrong with those sequences, you're an INCOMPETENT, and there's someone, somewhere, out there with VASTLY more talent stuck waiting on tables thanks to you.
Go write Hallmark Gift Cards. They're more your talent level.
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